Bryan wrote:Woops, the track I posted above was apparently not set for public view. Should be good to go now, here's the link again -
http://www.upload-mp3.com/files/272872_0vkxh/Haunted.mp3
light and airy, maybe reign in the reverb on the kick a touch? less wide perhaps? too much stereo width or panning on kicks and snares can be very distracting from the rest of the mix and the reverb is guilty of this ... very clear production and obviously you are a musical sort judging from the instruments and structure ... the floaty pad could drop in the mix a touch or develop into something else, maybe another pad evolving behind it? seems to be a cohesive approach going on here ... not entirely my sort of thing but what i hear is good
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i updated the track i started the thread with a bit ... i'm not that musical as you may have guessed! took a few keyboard lessons very young, can no longer read or play music from the page though but am OK at bashing buttons and fiddling with stuff til it sounds alright to my ears
decided to go with this as the track for the MC and the lyrics will focus on some keys aspects of being a kid in the 70s, 80s, 90s and 00s which will make up four verses (not recorded yet!)
http://myuzyk.net/promo/Skywave_Systems ... ys_WIP.mp3
up to 1'40" now ... the arp needs work and the track will gain momentum a bit with some added stabs and maybe a chopped break for good measure
any BoCisms were not intentional and must have slipped through subconsciously